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PostSubject: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:23 am

Before anyone actually reads this, please be aware that yes.. I do know the character seems a little overpowered. However, I went over my character with Kain, and asked him about limits and whatnot as to how monster hunters work. A lot of the items and abilities this character has I brought up and discussed with Kain for quite a while for what would be acceptable for this kind of character, and what wouldn't be. I don't plan to be the Jesus Christ of Olden with this character either, I'm simply looking for a new kind of character to play. He may seem a little strong, but that doesn't make him invincible. I also appreciate constructive criticism, but please don't bash the thread. Thanks in advance!

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A normal childhood for a change? I think so.
(Apologies for the incompletion of my bio, it will be done slowly so that I can make it good.)
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What better way to learn?
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Getting a first taste of blood.

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It's that time again, new biography chapter.



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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:52 am


I am not comfortable with a Dvergar, half or whole, from you yet. It is almost as silly as asking to be a dragonkin. Besides that, the lore is not even posted yet. Try keeping with some more available lore before you really consider taking up a character with potentially overpowered abilities or technology.

I will not be posting a decision for this one because I feel I will be too harsh, but know that as of yet, you have not been on the server long enough for my trust. This is neither denied or accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 7:06 am

Welp, I'm screwed
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 9:52 am

Black Banana Party wrote:
I do know the character seems a little overpowered
Black Banana Party wrote:
I went over my character with Kain

Well there's your problem.


Anyways, until there's a bio, you won't get a verdict from me. I seem to remember talking about this character in SF though, and it sounded promising, so we'll see.

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:02 am

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Where do I get one of these? I like it but can't seem to find a generator for it. Must I make my own?
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:14 am

All it is is some text made in photoshop. Right?

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:23 am

Munroe wrote:
All it is is some text made in photoshop. Right?

Krug made it for him after he took Krug's text from Kira's page.
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Sep 27, 2012 3:14 pm

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why use the alignment system if you don't know what it is?
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:42 am

Updated, will work more on it regularly till I finish. Changed some things around, added some others.
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Wed Oct 03, 2012 3:14 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:10 pm

Bep is half Dverfar. There is no problem with that unless it requires that he be heavily rooted in Dverfar culture. If that was the case, the lore still hasn't been written, and you'd have to go over it with Pat or me.

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:00 am

If you're a half elf wouldn't you be clanless? Or is that up to the elves n such. I don't know. I would think you would be clanless.
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:37 am

btw it's Aru not pychekan
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Fri Oct 05, 2012 9:48 am

Blitz wrote:
btw it's Aru not pychekan

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Sun Oct 14, 2012 12:51 pm

Truth be told, I like this character, and I think his RP shows that BBP can handle a character such as this.

I approve.

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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:43 pm

Pretty much agree with all of Dom's points.

I approve.
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PostSubject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress)   Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:12 am

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Pretty much agree with all of Dom's points.

I approve.

Pac Man does legitimately approve.

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