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Black Banana Party Giant Scrub
Posts : 63 Join date : 2012-08-31
| Subject: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:23 am | |
| Before anyone actually reads this, please be aware that yes.. I do know the character seems a little overpowered. However, I went over my character with Kain, and asked him about limits and whatnot as to how monster hunters work. A lot of the items and abilities this character has I brought up and discussed with Kain for quite a while for what would be acceptable for this kind of character, and what wouldn't be. I don't plan to be the Jesus Christ of Olden with this character either, I'm simply looking for a new kind of character to play. He may seem a little strong, but that doesn't make him invincible. I also appreciate constructive criticism, but please don't bash the thread. Thanks in advance!
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- Full name: Gabriel Rose
Alias(es): Solomon Gender: Male Age: 35 years old Race: Human Known Languages: Common, Dverger, Sidan, Aru. Most picked up in his travels to different countries. Occupation: Retired Gunsmith, Monster Hunter. Alignment:Good Birthplace: Sanctimonian East-Marches.
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- Hair: Long Black hair- shoulder length
Eye Color: Brown Body type: Athletic build, slight above average muscle size Height: 6'0'' Weight: 185 lbs. Clothing: Black trenchcoat with multiple straps and buckles for his gadgets, white buttoned collar shirt, leather overcoat, black brimmed hat, black fingerless leather gloves, black leather boots.
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Gabriel after cutting his hair.
A normal childhood for a change? I think so. (Apologies for the incompletion of my bio, it will be done slowly so that I can make it good.) - Spoiler:
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- Gabriel grew up in a small village in the forests of northern Sanctimonia. He was a rather normal child, not many special qualities in his early ages besides his enjoyment of building things. Gabriel was interested in taking apart and putting back together pretty much anything that was able to be taken apart. His father, who was half dverger was a gunsmith, which interested the young boy. He would talk about 'always wanting to be like his father' when he grew up. Is such a thing possible? Perhaps... will it happen? Only time will tell.
Gabriel became his father's apprentice at the age of nine, which lasted untill he was fourteen years old and could already craft decent quality items like daggers, razor blades, and other misc items. His father however, wasn't very surprised given his son was a quarter dverger. The young boy crafted his first pistol at the age of fifteen, which he kept as a personal defence weapon against forest creatures or bandits.
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- The age of 15, what an interesting time to have a sudden urge to want to learn how to use the guns you create, isn't it? Gabe sure thought so. One day he'd asked his father if he would teach him how to fire a gun in his spare time, he agreed. The two would go out every day after finishing their shop work until dinner time, which gave them a few hours of practice every day, this gave them almost 20+ hours a week practice. Eventually, the two had gone hunting a few times to give Gabriel some live practice. His first kill was a boar, which had gone pretty poorly on the first run. They'd brought two pistols with them, basic matchlocks. Gabriel took the opening shot, which missed and hit a tree. So the boar began to rush furiously in a charge towards the loud crack of gunfire in a threatened instinct. Gabriel's father had let him use the second gun. He dropped the match into it, and aimed towards the boar charging head on. The fuse lit and the gun fired it's round straight into the boar's snout. It's momentum had kept it going a few more feet until it lurched forward, hitting Gabriel's thigh with it's large tusks, ending badly for the both of them...
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- Gabriel screamed as the boar's tusk pierced his thigh, he fell to the ground with the boar, clenching his leg in pain as blood seeped from the wound. He grabbed a nearby rock, frenzied by his wound. He began to furiously beat the boar's head in with the rock, smashing it into a bloody pulp, being riddled with skull fragments and gore. He took deep breaths as his father came up behind him, slowly leaning down next to his wounded son. He spoke in a gentler tone, not to alarm the boy. "Don't let the bloodrage get the better of you, Gabe. It's hard, but you need to try and cope.." he then painfully removed the tusk from his leg, beginning to wrap it up in a cloth. He tucked both pistols into his belt, using a stick as a crutch as he limped home with his father who carried the boar over his shoulder.
It's that time again, new biography chapter. - Spoiler:
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- 'El-Cid' Sidan style rapier, no specialties, just a nice sword.
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Snaphance Arquebus class pistols. Unique craft, predecessor of the flint lock, but not quite there yet. Custom made by himself for himself. Fires silver bullets.
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El-Cid style dagger, this one's silver however with a carbon-steel trim along the outside of the blade to reduce blunting of the silver.
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- Five silver throwing daggers with a steel outline to keep sharp. Balanced well.
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PhoenixRhapsody Vengaboy
Posts : 240 Join date : 2012-02-20 Location : Texas, Y'all
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 6:52 am | |
| I am not comfortable with a Dvergar, half or whole, from you yet. It is almost as silly as asking to be a dragonkin. Besides that, the lore is not even posted yet. Try keeping with some more available lore before you really consider taking up a character with potentially overpowered abilities or technology.
I will not be posting a decision for this one because I feel I will be too harsh, but know that as of yet, you have not been on the server long enough for my trust. This is neither denied or accepted.
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Atlas Vengaboy
Posts : 166 Join date : 2012-08-27 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 7:06 am | |
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Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 9:52 am | |
| - Black Banana Party wrote:
- I do know the character seems a little overpowered
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- I went over my character with Kain
Well there's your problem. Anyways, until there's a bio, you won't get a verdict from me. I seem to remember talking about this character in SF though, and it sounded promising, so we'll see. | |
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PhoenixRhapsody Vengaboy
Posts : 240 Join date : 2012-02-20 Location : Texas, Y'all
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:02 am | |
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Where do I get one of these? I like it but can't seem to find a generator for it. Must I make my own? | |
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Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:14 am | |
| All it is is some text made in photoshop. Right? | |
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BooM Archmage
Posts : 629 Join date : 2012-02-22 Age : 29 Location : Paradise City, Florida
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 11:23 am | |
| - Munroe wrote:
- All it is is some text made in photoshop. Right?
Krug made it for him after he took Krug's text from Kira's page. | |
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Psyche Keeper of the Thunderboner, Protector of the Hatefuck Chalice
Posts : 141 Join date : 2012-02-04 Location : Fuckshit Creek
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Sep 27, 2012 3:14 pm | |
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- Alignment:True-Good
why use the alignment system if you don't know what it is? | |
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Black Banana Party Giant Scrub
Posts : 63 Join date : 2012-08-31
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:42 am | |
| Updated, will work more on it regularly till I finish. Changed some things around, added some others. | |
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Atlas Vengaboy
Posts : 166 Join date : 2012-08-27 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Wed Oct 03, 2012 3:14 pm | |
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Venom OPS Administrator
Posts : 504 Join date : 2012-08-17 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Wed Oct 03, 2012 11:10 pm | |
| Bep is half Dverfar. There is no problem with that unless it requires that he be heavily rooted in Dverfar culture. If that was the case, the lore still hasn't been written, and you'd have to go over it with Pat or me. | |
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Beans Scrub
Posts : 27 Join date : 2012-09-06 Age : 27 Location : America
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:00 am | |
| If you're a half elf wouldn't you be clanless? Or is that up to the elves n such. I don't know. I would think you would be clanless.
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Blitz Vengaboy
Posts : 299 Join date : 2012-04-07
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:37 am | |
| btw it's Aru not pychekan | |
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Black Banana Party Giant Scrub
Posts : 63 Join date : 2012-08-31
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Fri Oct 05, 2012 9:48 am | |
| - Blitz wrote:
- btw it's Aru not pychekan
Fixed | |
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Dominator046 Senior Wizard
Posts : 458 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 29 Location : 'Murica.
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Sun Oct 14, 2012 12:51 pm | |
| Truth be told, I like this character, and I think his RP shows that BBP can handle a character such as this.
I approve. | |
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Pac Man Scrublet
Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-03-31 Age : 29 Location : Tennessee
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Sun Mar 31, 2013 3:43 pm | |
| Pretty much agree with all of Dom's points.
I approve. | |
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Dominator046 Senior Wizard
Posts : 458 Join date : 2012-08-09 Age : 29 Location : 'Murica.
| Subject: Re: Gabriel Rose (Work In Progress) Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:12 am | |
| - Pac Man wrote:
- Pretty much agree with all of Dom's points.
I approve. Pac Man does legitimately approve. | |
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