Posts : 28 Join date : 2012-09-10 Age : 27 Location : Newfoundland, Canada
Subject: Martha Greene Mon Oct 01, 2012 1:29 pm
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Full name: Martha Agnus Greene Age 24 Gender: Female Birthplace:Unknown. Raised an orphan Deity:Cyus Occupation: Pirate Race:Kazuth [Leonthrope - Lion] Biography: (Sorry if the Bio's a little choppy. I sorta suck at these things) _____________________________________________ Chapter 1:
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In a ship in the middle of the Ocean, The ship has a black flag of skull and crossed swords. This is Martha's home. Or the only home he's ever known. Martha was Found by her adoptive mother Agnus Greene in an alleyway in a coastal fishing village.Who was captain of the ship. Her mother brought her back to the ship with her. Her mother was definately strict. though not in the way you might think. She was given alot of Freedom when it came to the ship. But she was never to touch a sword. gun. or bomb (For obvious reasons). Atleast in her early Childhood. She was normally kept in the captains quarters of the ship when the ship entered into a battle. It's obvious that when they went into battle they would either win or escape. Because if they didin't well I would'nt be telling this story right now then would I?
As Martha Enters Adolecense she finally is allowed to take up a Sword and practice. Given permission to train on the grounds that only her Mother trains her, of course she accepted the offer. She already aquired knowledge of fighting dirty by fighting with one of the other children on the boat name Carla. They would always get into fights and they still do today. The fights would always start with an insult from either of the two. which evolved into a full out brawl at some point. Of course let's just say Carla fought fair and Martha Never did. Martha punted Carla in the Groin on some occasions. sometimes she'd throw dust in her eyes and then kick her in the rear. and many other cheap tactics. Often times her mother would step in and heel kick both of them on head, often times aswell Martha would use the good'ol excuse "She started it" and then she'd receive another hit. And when Carla would laugh at her She'd get an even harder hit.
As Martha now Enters Adulthood at age 18 she's finally been allowed to venture off the ship on her own with some of the crew as a lesson in Leadership. Martha's mother heard of the location of an old abandoned village. that the residents were all killed in one night. and nothing was looted yet. Of course she jumped at the chance for the loot and sent Martha. When she and the group of crewman arrived at the village after a long walk they found it to be empty. just as the The moon was full and the stars were clear in the sky. a cold breeze swept through the area, along with the feeling of being watched. They started searching the homes for any valuebles and after a long painstaking hour. they finally all collected back in the center of the town. with necklaces gold coins and other trinkets and valuebles. A large. Abridfed monstrosity of a beast appeared to procceed to maul the group of men behind her into ribbons. It came down to Martha. She jumped out of the way of the Beasts swipe. Scrambling to her feet and removed her pistol from her belt. but she wasn't quick enough. and the beast managed to sink it's jaws into her left shoulder, She screamed out at the sudden pain. she quickly moved her pistol up to the creatures eye area. and pulled the trigger. the bullet managing to go through into the beasts eye. specifically the tear ducts. The beast removed it's jaws from her arm. and fell backward. She then removed her Cutlass from it's Scabbard after tossing her pistol. and ran it down into the creatures other eye down into the Cranial area . The creature then faded into death She grabbed some of her torn clothing and ripped it off the shirt, wrapping it around her wound. Staying in the Abandoned town the rest of the night. Unable to sleep due to the pain she was in.
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The following morning from the previous encounter with the Abridged creature She felt a sudden snap of pain. She fell over onto the ground Writhing in immense pain. she began losing herself. and her own conciousness went blank. When she woke up she was Barely naked with scraps of her old clothing on her. She was confused at this. her body ached all over. as she stood up. Looking around to try and get her bearings as to where she was. She noticed a rock she noticed in the distance when she got on the coast that interested her. She went to the rock and climbed up onto it. looking into the distance to find the boat. she ventured to the small slope she arrived on. and took the helm of it, going Directly to where her mother told her she would stop the ship. In a nearby fishing town. When she arrived she climbed into the ship. As everybody was probably out drinking their everclear. On the way in she caught the attention of a few on-lookers before she got inside. into her own quarters to get some of her extra clothes on, before-hand scrounging up some actual bandages and wrapping them around her wound. She waited for them to return and after her mother had returned she told her about the Strange occurence and about the creature that attacked her. She informed her that she had been bitten by a Thrope by the description she gave her. Martha found this Truth Difficult to Cope with. But her mother informed her that she would keep her condition a secret from the others. And her life continued as it was before. Just with a few Tweaks.
Martha has now reached the age of 24. She had been instructed to set up along a River with her own Crew of 5 men and women.As the Ships Crew was beggining to get a little suspicious of her. She was Dropped off at a port in Sanctimonia. Where she Traveled inland to an active trade course near Surna (Go figure). She had figured "It's near a trade City so Why should'nt it have a lot of profit in it?" and now it's present day. Events shall unfold and stuff will happen. Martha just doesen't know what.
Skills: Gunnery- Through practice over the years of her life. She knows how to shoot a ships cannon, Aswell as using Fire-arms such as the Pistol and The Blunderbuss
Swordsmanship- Being Trained through mentoring from her "Mother" and through experience. Martha has Learned to use a sword with a decent amount of Efficiency against her target. And she isn't afraid to fight Dirty
Transformation- Being a Leonthrope (Essentially a Were-lion) She has the Ability to Take the abridged form of a Lion. Increasing her strength and speed greatly, Aswell
Allignment: Chaotic Neutral- Being a Pirate She'll do almost Anything for money. She takes a bribe pretty Easily but that doesent mean She'll be honest after she receives it. She's a lieing Caniveing Greedy woman. But then again she is a Pirate right?.
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Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:38 pm
Hopefully you're familiar with the firearms in this setting, matchlock and wheel-lock (or motile-lock if you want to be really fancy). Leonthropy is not unheard of in Aeria's lore, there are 'thropes for many different animals, but that's asking for a lot. 'Thropes are extremely dangerous and powerful. Surna doesn't get too many pirates either, seeing as it's landlocked and all. It has a river, though. River pirates?
Kain Vengaboy
Posts : 257 Join date : 2012-02-04
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:00 pm
river pirates in the deep south. huck finn. durhur
look at me, im not being helpful at all
the picture is pretty, though
Spadge Vengaboy
Posts : 167 Join date : 2012-02-04 Age : 32 Location : United States
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Mon Oct 01, 2012 8:31 pm
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:46 pm
Toasters wrote:
"Race:Kazuth [Leonthrope - Lion]"
First off, the Kazuth are a race of cat people. So, Leonthropic Kazuth is basically a cat. Turning into a bigger cat. Then killing folks. Turning back into a smaller cat. And going about their day. Yeah, change that race to human. Or one of the elf races.
Anyways, I like it so far.
Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:30 pm
As negative as my views are of Kazuth, I see no reason to change the race.
Pat Administrator
Posts : 458 Join date : 2012-02-04
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:17 pm
I agree with Munroe. No reason to really change the race.
But I do see a few things worth a bit of concern.
First, there are no flintlocks in Olden yet. The most common type of firearm is the Matchlock Arquebus. You should see this thread and this thread before you continue.
Second.
From her Biography.
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"She started it -Nya"
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"It's near a trade City so Why should'nt it have a lot of profit in it?-Nya"
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Nya
No. Please, no. The Kazuth, to the extant that they exist in Olden today, are anything but the stereotypical anime catgirl. So, please, don't use that. In fact, they should actually look much less like humans with cat eats and tail and more like humanoid felines, but since the lore isn't concretely established on that part yet, I'll let it slide.
Kain Vengaboy
Posts : 257 Join date : 2012-02-04
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:38 pm
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:08 am
This is why you have to have direct permission from admin before applying for a therianthrope. We can't have this kind of stuff happening every time a player plays a potentially powerful character. We are supposed to avoid these situations.
I propose that any player that wants a vampire or therianthrope, as well as some other powerful races, should have a post by the admin saying permission has been given. It is not hard to send a PM to Mun or Ruta on the forums, so send them a question or request about the way the characters with special situations should be played.
It will help everyone out in the long run and we will not have to repeat this scenario.
Toasters Scrub
Posts : 28 Join date : 2012-09-10 Age : 27 Location : Newfoundland, Canada
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Sun Oct 07, 2012 7:00 am
Well. I sort of did ask an admin before creating the character. Well actually two :\ Non the less I apologize for the trouble.
Venom OPS Administrator
Posts : 504 Join date : 2012-08-17 Location : America
Subject: Re: Martha Greene Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:25 pm
Has everything been worked out with this character? I don't see a single accept at the moment, and I'm unsure if Toaster is playing her.