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PostSubject: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptySat Sep 29, 2012 1:26 pm

Biography:
Spoiler:
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Age: 24
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Abilities: Knowledge of Aiming and firing a Matchlock rifle
Knowledge of a Sword
Alignment: Good
Deity: Tyr
Birthplace: Vale
Occupation: Vale Soldier
Equipment:
Spoiler:
Other Misc. Items: 104 Shillings
White Cloth Shirt
Blue Cloth Pants


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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 01, 2012 3:18 am

sure, continue the mans dynasty
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 01, 2012 5:43 am

I would love to see you learn some formatting, wiz.

Honestly, formatting makes a great first impression on your app. First impressions are important.


Anyways, that bio was pretty painful to read, mostly because of the following issues I have with it.
1)
wizered153 wrote:
"...but was kept a seceret from the public."
Why? Was there a good reason? If so could you put it on there?

2)
wizered153 wrote:
"When word reached them of his fathers death..."
If he was a secret child, and Roland left him and his mother, how would anybody know them? Why would anyone in the Vale care?

3)
wizered153 wrote:
"...and make a life there, where his father lived once."
Why would he care about his father if he left him at a young age?

Pending leaning towards Denied
Patch up the holes in his story and I might accept
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 01, 2012 6:06 am

noodle wrote:
3)
wizered153 wrote:
"...and make a life there, where his father lived once."
Why would he care about his father if he left him at a young age?

Why wouldn't he?

Anyways, I'd agree with the rest of Noodle's post. Well, except maybe formatting. Formatting isn't important. Just fix up the bio some.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 01, 2012 6:26 am

The reason I don't make a super complicated fromat that describes every single item with three sentences, is because I like to keep things convient, I don't like going through a huge page, and only about one third is the bio and character description, and the rest is about the items.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 01, 2012 9:51 am

Munroe wrote:
noodle wrote:
3)
wizered153 wrote:
"...and make a life there, where his father lived once."
Why would he care about his father if he left him at a young age?

Why wouldn't he?

Anyways, I'd agree with the rest of Noodle's post. Well, except maybe formatting. Formatting isn't important. Just fix up the bio some.

Well, if I had known my dad had walked out on me to go kill things in a foreign country, I wouldn't really care if he died or not.

Another question related to that point, Why cant he make a name for himself in Vale?
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyFri Oct 05, 2012 11:33 am

Bump Comment, and Noodle I sorta fixed some of the problems, and one slight edit makes a reason why he would care. Roland left behind his best sword so his son would soon recieve it.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptySun Oct 14, 2012 2:47 am

Gregory Vulcor Please

Why has no one responded in weeks?
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptySun Oct 14, 2012 10:05 am

Nick-Nack Paddy-Wack, give a dog a bone, this Vulcor is rolling home.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptySun Oct 21, 2012 11:14 am

Gregory Vulcor N506199a649c91

How many more accepts before this can be moved out of approval?
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptySun Oct 21, 2012 11:21 am

2/3 Community
0/1 Moderator
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 4:17 am

Venom OPS wrote:
2/3 Community
0/1 Moderator

BooM accepted, I believe his word would count as a moderator vote.

So, it would be 1/3 community, and 1/1 moderator, in that case.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 4:20 am

I'm no moderator.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 6:40 am

BooM wrote:
I'm no moderator.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 7:47 am

Venom OPS wrote:
BooM wrote:
I'm no moderator.
obviously better than venom though
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 9:35 am

BooM wrote:
Venom OPS wrote:
BooM wrote:
I'm no moderator.
obviously better than venom though

Not really.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Oct 22, 2012 10:07 am

PhoenixRhapsody wrote:
BooM wrote:
Venom OPS wrote:
BooM wrote:
I'm no moderator.
obviously better than venom though

Not really.

My apologies.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyWed Oct 31, 2012 10:10 am

HEY IS ANYONE STILL OUT THERE?
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptySat Nov 03, 2012 5:41 pm

For the record, I've seen Munroe on multiple occasions express that the whole 1 Mod - 3 Com rule was merely a pleasant way to gauge whether something should definitely be accepted or not; he said it was not adamantly necessary for approval. Now, while I'm not saying that give anyone who can the right to just willy-nilly rocket things through approval; I am saying that Munroe himself has expressed there being some flexibility in the approval process.

This character does not possess too much power, he isn't as experienced, is mostly a passive character, and seems to have a general drive to add to the roleplay on the server. I'm saying that it might be worth taking a second look at, maybe taking a look and seeing if the amount of approval available from the community is well enough to have this character in game, or if it perhaps requires something more adamant.

Having said this... I would say a couple more community votes would, or maybe a moderator vote alone, would give me enough motivation to pass this character through approval, were I able to do so. That is not my place however, I merely offer my own stance on the situation.


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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyTue Nov 13, 2012 2:22 pm

Updates some things, and if you think he shouldn't be part of the vale army, please don't complain here, complain at my Vale Army Page by clicking on the link below.


Got Complaints?-------------> https://aeriaroleplay.rpg-board.net/t766-the-vale-army <----------------Got Complaints?

Also Bump Comment
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyMon Nov 19, 2012 1:40 pm

Seems kosher to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyTue Dec 11, 2012 8:12 am

I love how the 'no's are longer than his application.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 11:41 am

Bumpity bump comment
Also this has been stuck in approval for 4 months
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyThu Jan 31, 2013 12:39 pm

wizered153 wrote:
Bumpity bump comment
Also this has been stuck in approval for 4 months

Unfortunate that it has, but seeing as there's been no server and no real RP in several months it's not surprising. Thankfully that will be fixed in (hopefully) the next several days.

As for your character, I'm fine accepting him.
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PostSubject: Re: Gregory Vulcor   Gregory Vulcor EmptyFri Feb 08, 2013 12:32 am

I'll move this along into the land of accepted characters and milkshakes.

ON ONE CONDITION.

If wheel-locks are standard issue to an entire army I demand you hand over whatever goose is squeezing out golden eggs, because short of a whole henhouse of those bastards working around the clock there's no way an entire army could be funded with wheel-locks.
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