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StelthySlayr
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PostSubject: Eifion Cairo   Fri Jan 17, 2014 10:14 am

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Full Name: Eifion Cairo (Ay-Fee-On Kie-Row)
Nickname: Cairo

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Physical
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: Forty-Three
Body Type: Average
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 190
Skin Tone: Pale
Hair Color: Brown
Hair Style: Shoulder length, styled back
Eye Color: Dark brown

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Other
Birthplace: Torah, Sultanate of Torah
Family: Mother: Gabria Cairo (Deceased), Father: Tier Cairo (Deceased), Significant ancestor: Unidentified sorcerer (Deceased)
Nationality: Sidan (Torah)
Languages: Sidan, Common, Occitanian
Religion: N/A

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Combat Role
Eifion's role in combat mostly encompasses intimidation.  He will use powerful illusion magic to turn himself, his allies, or even entire armies into frightening monsters or demons to end a fight before it begins.  At times, he may use abjuration magic to turn parts of his clothing or body into actual weapons for self-defense.

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Utility Role
Eifion has a relatively unsubstantial role outside of combat.  His limited knowledge of abjuration allows for an amount of object manipulation and his extensive knowledge of magic and the land of Aeria is also formidable, but not uncommon.

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Other Skills
Eifion is trained as a skilled sculptor and therefore also has knowledge of being a potter or merchant.  His magical prowess contributes to his powers of persuasion.

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Armor
Leather vest
Fabric undershirt
Fabric pants
Sandals
Dark scarf
Dark robe with silver metal trim and hood

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Tools
Lantern
Multiple flasks of oil (carries around 4 at any one time)
Flint and steel
Throwing knives (carries around 15 at any one time)

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Summary
Eifion Cairo found his arcane powers in magic, mainly illusion magic, at a very young age almost accidentally.  He grew up in Torah secretly training them and even crafted his own robe with unique silver strips along its fabric.  Ever since he was young, Eifion's magic isolated him from his friends and family and he has remained not as social ever since.  He trained in the profession of sculpting and got his own shop as a young adult.  When his parents died and he became very sick of using his magic only secretively, he went into a depressive mid-life crisis and began consuming illegal substances to sate himself.  When he finally became sober of these drugs, he decided to visit the town of Surna for a time to get away from the life he had created in Torah temporarily.  While Eifion has not truly been tested in combat yet, he is confident that his illusion magic will be shocking to any foe and even perhaps armies.

Childhood
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Early Adulthood
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Late Adulthood
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Last edited by StelthySlayr on Mon Jan 20, 2014 1:32 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : attributes and magic details)
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PostSubject: Re: Eifion Cairo   Sat Jan 18, 2014 11:40 am

I'm not going to judge yet but I do have suggestions;

x amount of throwing knives would be good

And specific spells would also be great.



-I have yet to read the bio I will do it later but that's the only thing I first noticed at a glance.
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PostSubject: Re: Eifion Cairo   Sun Jan 19, 2014 4:11 pm

Thanks a lot. Please criticize in any way you can I mean it, I only want to improve it to the max however I can. I'll definetely change that as soon as I can.
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PostSubject: Re: Eifion Cairo   Mon Jan 20, 2014 5:40 am

There we go.  I have no idea how powerful spell casters are in general right now.  My illusion magic is pretty crazy and can really freak people out, but i kept the abjuration and conjuration way down.
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PostSubject: Re: Eifion Cairo   Thu Jan 30, 2014 1:56 pm

One thing I would mention is that to cast a spell you need to "weave" the spell first, so some sort of magical incantation or gestures.

Also, its a good idea to set up a small list of examples of what spells and whatnot he could cast and on what scale/level

Backstory looks quite solid, although may want to go a bit more in-depth about how he learned his magic to support his strength in each. Books, private tutors etc. Having a strong magical affinity in a field can only bring you so far on your own.


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