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Alphonseelric
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PostSubject: Caine Temple   Thu Aug 15, 2013 5:08 am

Basic Information:
Gender: Male.
Age: 17.
Looks as if he was 19.
Race: Human/Mankind.
Languages: English (or whatever the English language is in Surna).
Birthplace: The Wastes.
Occupation: Mercenary.
Deity: Non-religious.
Hair Color: Black.
Hair Style: Long.
Eye Color: Dark blue.
Skin Tone: Tan-ish (regular human skin).
Height: 5'4.
Weight: 126lbs (I don't know if this is underweight or not).
Body Type: Well built but small.

Appearance: Caine is usually seen in a black coat with white lines coming along the edges of it, he has two black sword sheathes on his back and inside are two steel swords, he wears a dark grey undershirt and black trousers, his boots are a dark brown (almost black) and are made of leather.
           
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Personality: Caine usually shuts out the world around him (other than a select few he has met already) keeping to himself or talking to a merchant.

Abilities:

Magic: Illusion magic to avoid and distract enemies

Swordsmanship: Growing up in the wastes, Caine learnt how to use a sword from a young age, soon adapting to two after a while, it suited him a bit more, he is very skilled with bladed weapons from knifes to long swords.

Agility and Stamina: Because of his light armor and younger body, he can run for a respectable time at a consistent speed.

Biography:

Early Life
   _Caine grew up from a small village in the wastes, it was a small town so Caine didn't become that social, his uncle teaching him how to use a blade after his father passed away soon after his birth, a few years later a Gun-iib Sakneed attacked the small village, killing his mother along with half of the village. Him and his uncle, being two of the very few survivors, decided to head off in search of a new home in a better place.

Adult Life
 _Caine's uncle dying along the way, he finds himself in Surna, after burying his uncle Caine decided to become a mercenary, earning a living by acting as a body guard to others, Caine is inspired to become a mercenary after one saves him and his uncle from a group of theives by using illusion magic to distract and leave the thieves stunned, Caine wanted to learn this and soon became intrigued by it, he soon learns how to do the process known as 'Weaving' where one uses a series of hand gestures and chants to manitpulate the world around them, his mother was very potent with magic, but he never knew as he was very antisocial, even with his mother, now knowing of this newly discovered ability, Caine goes off in search of a town ,soon binning the old rags and tattered leather he called armor, replacing it with a nice, black coat  

Current Time

_Now living in Surna, providing protection to anyone if needed (if the price is right), Caine travels around in search of jobs to make a few shillings, he sometimes makes off with a mug of ale from the tavern being him looking older than he is.

Inventory: 2x Steel swords

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1x Black coat with thin chainmail under it

(refer to top picture for coat)

1x Matchlock pistol with 8 rounds

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Sorry if my knowledge of the lore is absolute crap, I'm not a big reader but I did try and read what I could, please don't hate, and please correct me if i made a mistake or didnt follow the lore right, and if anyone says Im overpowered (which I think I kind of am) just remember that my armor is only chainmail and a coat

(And yes, I used predator's xantumal app format because I thought it was nice)


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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Sun Aug 18, 2013 1:46 pm

Alphonseelric wrote:

Height: 5'4.
Weight: 150lbs (I don't know if this is underweight or not).
Body Type: Well built but small.
That's actually overweight.

But, yeah. I helped you out with it so, pending, waiting for sexy roleplay.
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Sun Aug 18, 2013 2:03 pm

Bro, sexy rp all round, and im fixing the weight
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Wed Aug 21, 2013 6:11 pm

The Sand Wyrms don't venture into the frozen wastes as far as I'm aware, at least not the Sand variety. Also, I don't know if people actually live in the Wastes proper, but more on the fringes, and that's like, Finland climate at best. Also, I think your weight would be more believable in the mid-150s through to the low 160s. The weight you have would make you very scrawny, even for the height listed.

But, you've done well in providing research for your first character, and I certainly appreciate the attempt. Those flaws are easily fixed by changing two names, and everything else seems sound. You show a desire to present your character ICly in the server, and carry him well; you've done a fair enough job on the forums, and I know not everyone loves to make biographies.

I'll give this an accept, as you definitely don't ask for anything too extreme.I'd ask what the swords and chainmail are made out of, but either iron or steel is fine. I jsut wanted to mention that steel is ICly expensive, but since we're probably more special than your common peasantry, I let people start with steel as long as its within reason.

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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:09 am

How many fucking mercenaries are in Surna?

In any case it seems alright. I don't really like the format but that's probably just since I'm used to everything being aligned on the center of the page. See you around.
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Thu Aug 22, 2013 8:13 am

Well thanks :D
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Thu Aug 22, 2013 8:23 am

Even though i have little weight to pull around, I +support this regardless!
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Thu Aug 22, 2013 10:53 am

spit.respectable wrote:
How many fucking mercenaries are in Surna?
Surna's a major trade hub for Sanctimonia, son. Caravans need their guards and whatnot.

Also, Accepted
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Sat Aug 24, 2013 12:23 pm

I have rped quite a bit with this character, Yes.
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Sat Aug 24, 2013 1:32 pm

I'd throw an accept your way, pretty kosher.

ALTHOUGH, as a personal note, please dont try to make characters based off of anime characters and make it super obvious. Be sly about it
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Sat Aug 24, 2013 7:06 pm

A modest application, one in a blue moon, but that's not a bad thing. I'd love to see how this character's played, I'll toss you my accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Caine Temple   Sun Aug 25, 2013 8:34 am

Atlas wrote:
I'd throw an accept your way, pretty kosher
AM I REALLY PRETTY? :O
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