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PostSubject: Delvimir Dragoon   Mon Feb 11, 2013 1:50 pm

Delvimir Dragoon

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The boy Delvimir Dragoon was born in a small home in Deep Southern Pycheko, when he was born his parents were suprised to find he was a Tiefling.

Early Life

    In his Early life, Delvimir was forced to be kept a secret. His parents hid him in their basement and kept him healthy and calm. He never saw much of the outside world, except for when he could come up to the rest of the house. His parents never turned him in to anyone because they cared about him too much. Delvimir never met any kids his age and never left the house. His childhood was secret and noone ever knew of his existence, except his parents.

Teen Life

    By the time Delvimir was 14 in human years, his tail had grown out and his horns have came through. He was still kept a secret from the rest of the world, but spent more time out of the basement and with his parents.He always wondered what the outside world was like, but he knew for his safety, and his parents safety, he never left. But one day, someone caught a glimpse of Delvimir when he was above stairs in the rest of the house and reported in that a tiefling was in city limits, and the house was raided and burned down by Pychekan Officers. His parents tried to defend Delvimir, but were slain in battle, which Delvimir witnessed. Delvimir, rather than fighting a battle he couldn't win, managed to escaped before the entire house collapsed, and the Officers believed that Delvimir had died in the building.
   
    Delvimir was forced to cross the mountains and get into Vale, but the cold was too much for Delvimir to handle, and he passed out in the snow. The next thing he remembered was waking up in a cabin deeper in the mountains, being helped back to health by an Elven hunter. The hunter claimed he found Delvimir buried while he hunting. When Delvimir was once again healthy, the Elf assisted him down the mountain and they went their separate ways.

Adult Life

    As Delvimir was more exposed to the outside world, his Tiefling side began to unfold. He kept to himself and always wore a hood. He never stayed in one place to long, continuing to move southwest. Along his journeys, he managed to obtain an Iron broadsword and found out that he could summon fire and cover a part of his body, and made work as a mercenary. For the next seven years he would be in this work, and even though he had little experience with any weaponry, he caught on quickly. While doing this job he bought an Iron Chest-plate for extra protection. Over time he gave up his job as a merc and continued to move south, still mentally scarred by watching his parents be killed. He continued to travel until he hit the city of Surna, when the food he got in Vale ran out. Delvimir believes he is far enough away from Pycheko and believes he is now ready to make a living.
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Iron Chestplate
Iron Broadword
34 Shillings

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Gender: Male
Age: 32 Human Years
Race: Human Tiefling
Birthplace: Pycheko
Abilities: Swordwork (Average Skills)
Fire Tolerance
Able to summon fire

Fighting Style

Delvimir's Fighting Style relies on quickly rushing into a fight head on and using a combination of strong sword stabs, slashes, and punches. This fighting style relies on using up all your energy within the first few minutes to over power your opponent's balance and defence for a quick and deadly fight. Unfortunatly, if a fight goes on for an extended period of time, Delvimir will quickly tire and not be able to do heavy blows until he gets a chance to rest. In some fights he may use his natural ability of fire to surround his hand and arm to burn people, or in the case of people wearing metal armor, heat up the pieces and basicely cook his opponent.


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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:01 pm

Seems legit, but put up an ability section for us. We just need to be able to see what he can do. I'm not stingey on backgrounds and it gets the job done for me, so just an ability page. Pending until skill set shown
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Mon Feb 11, 2013 11:12 pm

Just expand on his basics, age and the such. Also an ability section for any magic he has as a tiefling.
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Tue Feb 12, 2013 9:38 am

I shall throw all that shit and stuff in, I was tired last night and forgot to do it.
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Tue Feb 12, 2013 1:27 pm

wizered153 wrote:
But one day, somone reported in that a tiefling was in city limits, and the house was raided by Pychekan Officers.

On behalf of Black Banana Party and myself: XXXL33TSCOP3WALLH4X 4L1F3!!

INB4, seriously though, how did they see him? Random Pycheko farmhouse raid?

And I guess the years of experience is enough to provide a career in metalsmithing. However, real estate isn't cheap, you'd need a fair amount of capital to set up a permanent shop. Where did all that money come from? Let alone the cost of upkeep and equipment.

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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Tue Feb 12, 2013 1:36 pm

I believe your backstory is missing some key elements, it looks pretty much like this...


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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Wed Feb 13, 2013 8:36 am

wizered153 wrote:
Early Life

In his Early life, Delvimir was forced to be kept a secret. His parents hid him in their basement and kept him healthy and calm. He never saw much of the outside world, except for when he could come up to the rest of the house. His parents never turned him in to anyone because they cared about him too much. Delvimir never met any kids his age and never left the house. His childhood was secret and noone ever knew of his existance, except his parents.

Not seeing how someone could be healthy in a cramped moldy basement, but okay.

wizered153 wrote:
Teen Life

By the time Delvimir wad 14 in human years, his tail had grown out and his horns have came through. He was still kept a secret from the rest of the world, but spent more time out of the basement and with his parents.He always wondered what the outside world was like, but he knew for his safety, and his parents safety, he never left. But one day, somone caught a glimpse of Delvimir and reported in that a tiefling was in city limits, and the house was raided by Pychekan Officers. Delvimir's true Tiefling abilities were revealed. He managed to fight off the Pychekan officers and escaped, but his two parents were killed in the battle.

Delvimir was forced to cross the moutains and get into Vale, but the cold was too much for Delvimir to handle, and he passed out in the snow. The next thing he remembered was waking up in a cabin deeper in the moutains, being helped by an Elven hunter. The hunter claimed he found Delvimir burried while he hunting. When Delvimir was once again healthy, the Elf assisted him down the moutain and they went their seperate ways.

So someone caught a glimpse of Delvimir, while he was locked up in the basement? So then the house was... raided? Okay? And somehow... he fought off PYCHEKAN OFFICERS? Yeah, no.
I doubt that anybody, even a tiefling who spent his entire life in a cramped basement could take on multiple Pychekan Officers.

Dont forget your demon magics brah.
http://aeriaroleplay.forumotion.com/t779-tieflings wrote:
Tieflings possess an ability similar to those who are planetouched. They can call upon flames to coat part of their body for a brief period of time, without use of a weave. With their inborn ability to resist fire, the tieflings can do this without risk of bodily harm. Tieflings should be weary, though, of Aten's and Tyr's Holy flames, being divine magic, it transcends a tiefling's resistance to fire. Being of demon-blood, tiefling's fire have an aura of unholiness about them, and as such burn not only at flesh, but also at the soul itself. Not enough to kill, but enough to render one's sacred field useless. Only divine healing can mend one's sacred field after such an event.

Anyways, it's an Accept once you change the part where this tiefling who should be really sick all the time somehow fought off multiple Pychekan Officers.


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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Wed Feb 13, 2013 5:48 pm

that's awfully rude noodle
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Thu Feb 14, 2013 11:41 am

Noodle is qualified to criticize biographies because all of his make perfect sense

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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Thu Feb 14, 2013 12:03 pm

Munroe wrote:
Noodle is qualified to criticize biographies because all of his make perfect sense

lol duh
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Thu Apr 25, 2013 6:39 am

I apologize if my message was a little rash in its making. I believe this character would be okay if the main backstory question was answered, or at least explained in a way that we know there is a valid reason he left there alive.

If that comes around, I can neglect everything else, blacksmithing and real estate business included, and give an accept.

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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:22 pm

I think I'll try to get back into this thing and see if I can fix it up. I'll reread a Tiefling's abilities and see if I can get this thing in good condition.
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:42 pm

wizered153 wrote:
I think I'll try to get back into this thing and see if I can fix it up. I'll reread a Tiefling's abilities and see if I can get this thing in good condition.

I'm assuming Xantumal caused this to happen? xD
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:45 pm

bd863 wrote:
I'm assuming Xantumal caused this to happen? xD

I don't know who that is, I just kinda came across this while I was looking through the approval section of the character compodium, but I thought I was looking through the regular section
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PostSubject: Re: Delvimir Dragoon   Wed Jul 24, 2013 1:00 am

wizered153 wrote:
bd863 wrote:
I'm assuming Xantumal caused this to happen? xD

I don't know who that is, I just kinda came across this while I was looking through the approval section of the character compodium, but I thought I was looking through the regular section

oh lol
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