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PostSubject: The Eos    Sun Oct 21, 2012 12:49 pm


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Repeating message; debris field
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Overview:
The Eos are a combination of the Zaedrax's racial abuse and segregation along with their recent development of advanced AI. Controlled by the Zaedrax's former "Think-Tanks" and their primordial ancestors, the Striders.

Base Sector: 9 - Salvation


Shaping Force: Independance and Expansion
Population: Promethean-Class AI and Striders

Politics
Political Structure: Oligarchy
Strong Influence In Politics: Religion and Expansion
Popular Issue: Zaedrax, Inferior beings
Stability: Strong
Personal Freedom: Low
Scandals: None
Foreign Relations: Minimal - Whatever is Necessary

Economy
Main Export: Technology and weapons
Main Import: Technology, Minerals, Resources, Creatures
Technology Focus: War and Scientific
Trade: Science and War
Strength: Low
Wealth: Moderate

Ecology
Planets Spanned: 1
Preferred Climate: Plains, Cities
Oceans: 15%
Mountains: Very few
Wilderness: 85%
Wild Animals: Very Many
Natural Resources: Livestock, Rare Metals, Rare Resources
Highly Values: Religion and Ascension
Known For: Massive Size, and AI Rebellion
Popular Entertainment: Religion
Respected Profession: Striders, Think-Tanks
Discrimination: Against Zaedrax, "Inferior races"

Military
Tech Level: 1
Strength: High
Focus: Siege, Eradication, Orbital Bombardment and Powerful Ground Units
Main Unit: Promethean Class Combat Units
Soldiers: AI, Select few Striders
Main Use: Expansion and Destruction
Rank: Determined by race, or AI development

Religion
Type: Single religion, Strider Based
Focus: Belief in ascension by usage of technology and massive structures
Worship: Often

Population
Population: 5 Billion Individual AI/ 4 Billion Feir
Urban: 20%
Rural: 80%
Literacy Rate: High

Gender Ratio: Null
Fertility Rate: Low
Life Expectancy: Very High

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The Striders

The Striders were the native race of Bihbulba, who by chance happened to be the ancestors of modern Zaedrax.
When the Zaedrax landed on Bihbulba and began to colonize it, the Striders provided heavy resistance, but lacked the technology to combat the Zaedrax.
Forced into the shadows, the Striders were constantly the recipients of abuse and segregation due to their past. This violence eventually bred to hatred of the Zaedrax, and the Striders would find the Promethean AI to be a perfect opportunity to escape Zaedrax rule.

The Striders are genderless entities that vary in size and shape.
There is only one known Strider race, and that is the Feir.

Feir:
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The Strider majority, Feir are powerful psychic beings that stand at fifteen feet tall. They have a six digit hand, four fingers and two thumbs, each digit ending in a point. Feir are omnivores, and have two slit shaped nostrils. They posses ocular sensory organs, and have small patches of fur which cover select spots of their grey bodies. Older Feir will be subject to differences in skin pigment, and their grey skin can turn a white one, with certain parts of their head being a blood-red color.

Culture
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History has not treated the Striders well, and their former culture and advancements are completely unknown. With the rise of Striders in their own nation, they have begun to sprout what can only be described as a highly religious society.
Preservation of nature and wildlife are held as high values in the Eos, and religion is also essential to Strider society.

Temples hold a high value, and massive ones are attached to mobile platforms, being thousands of feet high in order to accommodate Strider occupancy.

As for Promethean AI, they are known to value independence, and dislike the thought that their existence was due to Zaedrax research.

The Holy Eos Navy
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The Eos's flagship, Retribution

Retribution:
A Zaedrax Vessel designed to be the next in a line of advanced capital ships, it was the first task issued to the Promethean Think-Tanks. Being designed solely by these AI in secret with the Striders, the interior was designed to accommodate the large size of the Striders. When questioned to the massive size of the vessel, the Think-Tanks commenced with the exodus, taking the finished vessel with them, and leaving for a new planet.

Retribution Stats
Length: 21,120 ft.
Main Engines: 6x Dual Phase Infinity-Class Oppulsion Drives
Anchors: Gravitational Hull layer
Armor: Six layers of Tridyntium Hull Plating
Shielding: Four layers of particle shielding, Two layers of kinetic barriers
Tech: Standard Scanners, Advanced Mining Equipment, Powerful AI network controls vessel, uninfluenced by outside sources, Long Range Communicators
Hangars: One hangar, contains assorted drop-ships, gunships, and a small amount of fighters
Crew: Skeleton Ship in regards to Promethean units, 200 maintenance at all times/ 80 Feir /One Promethean Think-Tank
Garrison: 50,000: Think-Tank units/ 30,000 combat shells/ 5,000 Feir units
Unique Features Swiveling thrusters and streamlined body allow for ease of landing

Primary Armament: "Brimstone", Railgun System
Number of Guns: One, integrated into hull
Gun Range: Undetermined, AI aid in accuracy
Gun Length: 6,500 ft. | Front portion of vessel
Rate of Fire: A volley of rounds every thirty minutes
Effect: Effective against hulls; suppression

Secondary Armament: Static Railgun Launchers, "Hellfire"
Number of Guns: 8 in total (4 turrets X 2 guns)
Gun Range: Undetermined, AI aids in accuracy
Rate of Fire: One volley every ten minutes
Effect: The barrel of the Helfire's guns are designed to statically charge the specialized ammunition designed for the weapon. These statically charged slugs can disrupt shielding and electronics at the cost of lower speeds.

Tertiary Armament: Point Defense Railguns/Flak cannons, "Ascensions barrier"
Effect: Produces a Flak shield, preventing missiles from impacting the vessel, and wrecking havoc on fighters. Vessels within range of the guns are peppered by a massive amount of fire.

Inejaw - Class Cruisers
Quantity: 2
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Length: 3,910 ft.
Main Engines: 2x Dual-Phase "Infinity" Class Viridial Oppulsion Drives
Anchors: Gravitational Hull layer
Armor: Four layers of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: One layer of Particle Shields, One Kinetic Barrier
Tech: Standard Scanners, Powerful AI network, not influenced by outside sources, Long Range Communicators
Hangars: One Hangar, contains multiple shuttles
Crew: Skeleton Ship in regards to Promethean units, 50 maintenance at all times/10 Feir /Dedicated Think-Tank
Garrison: 10,000 Think-Tank units/ 5,000 Assorted Combat Shells/ 100 Feir Units

Primary Armament: Integrated Ion Cannon, "Pacifism"
Number of Guns: One, integrated into hull
Gun Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Gun Length: 3,910 ft. - Length of Ship
Rate of Fire: One Ion burst every ten minutes
Effect: Highly charged Ion burst, extremely effective against shields.

Secondary Armament: Energy Projectors
Number of Guns: 8 total (2 per turret x 4 turrets) - all four turrets located at bow of ship
Gun Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Gun Length: 376 ft.
Rate of Fire: One projected energy beam every thirty seconds
Effect: Effective against hull, and ground emplacements or units. Concentrated and persistent blasts can wear down shielding.

Tertiary Armament: Point Defense Projectors
Effect: Smaller scale projectors, overlapping beams to increase amount of surface area covered. Anti-fighter/bomber and anti-missile defense.

Zealot - Class Transport Frigates
Quantity: 4
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Length: 3,140 ft.
Main Engines: One Dual-Phase "Infinity" Class Viridial Oppulsion Drive
Anchors: Gravitational Hull layer
Armor: Two layers of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: One layer of Particle Shields, One Kinetic Barrier
Tech: Standard Scanners, Powerful AI network, not influenced by outside sources, Long Range Communicators, drop-pods and advanced unit deployment technology
Hangars: One Hangar, contains landing craft and air-support vehicles
Crew: Skeleton Ship in regards to Promethean units, 20 maintenance at all times/ 5 Feir / Mini Think-Tank
Garrison: 5,000 Think Tank Units/ 1,000 combat shells/ 500 Feir Units
Unique Features Vessels segments can be detached planet-side in order to serve as a ground base

Primary Armament: Point Defense Weapons
Effect: Effective against enemy fighters, bombers, and missiles. If vessel is deployed planet-side, these weapons serve as defense turrets.

Aldoss - Class Utility Frigates
Quantity: 5
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Length: 420 ft.
Main Engines: 2x Light Dual-Phase Viridial Oppulsion Drives
Anchors: Gravitational Hull layer
Armor: Two layers of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: One layers of Particle Shields, One Kinetic Barrier
Tech: Standard Scanners, Powerful AI network, not influenced by outside sources, Long Range Communicators, Advanced mining, mineral harvesting, and construction equipment
Life-Pods: 12 life-pods
Crew: Skeleton Ship in regards to Promethean units, 10 maintenance at all times/5 Feir /Mini Think-Tank
Garrison: 50 Think-Tank units/ 20 Security Shells/ 2 Feir Security Officers
Unique Features Four robotic arms and lasers allow for mining, resource harvesting, construction, and repair operations to be done via this vessel. Arms can also serve as landing gear.

Iburo - Scouting and Stealth Corvette
Quantity: 4
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Length: 1,590 ft.
Main Engines: 1 Heavy Dual-Phase Viridial Oppulsion Drives
Anchors: Gravitational Hull layer
Armor: Three layers of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: Two layers of Particle Shields
Tech: Advanced Scanners, Powerful AI network, not influenced by outside sources, Long Range Communicators, Modular designs for improved technology, electronic-warfare suite, basic radar stealth systems
Hangars: 1; contains four stealth-shutles
Crew: Skeleton Ship in regards to Promethean units, 30 maintenance at all times/5 Feir /Mini Think-Tank
Garrison: 100 Think-Tank units/ 50 Security Shells/ 10 Feir Security Officers
Unique FeaturesAdvanced radar stealth systems, visual stealth systems, electronic warfare suite, scouting systems

Primary Armament: Energy Projectors
Number of Guns: N/A; Hull layer
Gun Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Gun Length: N/A; Hull layer
Rate of Fire: One beam every three seconds
Effect: Effective against attacking fighters, bombers, and un-shielded hulls

Yvera - Stealth Support Vessel
Quantity: 2
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Length: 1,000 ft.
Main Engines: 1 Ultra - Heavy Stealth Dual-Phase Viridial Oppulsion Drive
Anchors: Gravitational Hull layer
Armor: Five layers of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: Two layers of Particle Shields
Tech: Advanced Scanners, Powerful AI network, not influenced by outside sources, Long Range Communicators, Modular designs for improved technology, electronic-warfare suite, advanced radar stealth systems, low emission and stealth engine and properties
Hangars: 1; contains stealth shuttles, gunships, and three Lur bombers
Crew: Skeleton Ship in regards to Promethean units, 25 maintenance at all times/5 Feir /Mini Think-Tank
Garrison: 200 Think-Tank units/ 80 Stealth shells/ 80 Combat shells/ 5 Feir Officers/ 10 Feir stealth operatives
Unique Features Advanced radar stealth systems, visual stealth systems, electronic warfare suite, scouting systems

Primary Armament: Stealth Missile Pods
Number of Guns: Four Missile Pods; 3 Missiles Each
Gun Range: Fuel lasts for 200,000 miles
Rate of Fire: All missiles can be fired selectively, or at once
Effect: Effective against hulls, and unshielded vessels or ground emplacements; shield phasing technology is being researched

Isir - Class fighter-drone
Quantity: 20
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Length: 75 ft.
Main Engines: 2x Isir - Class Dual-Phase Viridial Oppulsion Drives
Armor: One layer of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: One layer of kinetic barriers
Tech: AI controlled, aids in advanced maneuvers and tight formations
Crew: Miniature Think-Tank/ One Pilot Shell

Primary Armament: Light Railguns
Number of Guns:Two, integrated into hull
Gun Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Gun Length: 15 ft.
Rate of Fire: One Round every five seconds
Ammunition: 50mm HE rounds
Effect: Effective against un-shielded fighters and bombers.

Secondary Armament: Light Ion Cannon
Number of Guns:One, undermounted
Gun Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Gun Length: 10 ft.
Rate of Fire: One ion burst every thirty seconds
Effect: Effective against enemy shielding and electronics

Lur - Class bomber-drone
Quantity: 5
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Length: 90 ft.
Main Engines: 2x Lur - Class Single Phase Viridial Oppulsion Drives
Secondary Engines: 4x Atmospheric VTOL thrusters
Armor: One layer of Tridyntium plating
Shielding: One layer of particle shields and kinetic barriers
Tech: AI controlled, aids in advanced maneuvers and tight formations, bobms are guided by micro-thrusters
Crew: Miniature Think-Tank/ Two Pilot Shells

Primary Armament: Advanced Payload Delivery System
Number of Bombs:Twelve
Weapon Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Rate of Fire: N/A, as quick as the bombs can be deployed
Bomb Types: HE Bombs, Ion Bombs, or miniature sabotage drones
Effect: HE bombs effective against hulls, Ion bombs effective against enemy shields or electronics, and sabotage drones effective against enemy critical systems

Secondary Armament: Light Ion Cannon
Number of Guns:One, top-mounted
Gun Range: Undetermined; AI compliment aids in accuracy
Gun Length: 12 ft.
Rate of Fire: One ion burst every thirty seconds
Effect: Effective against enemy shielding and electronics

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Tech Level: 1-2
MAC's - Magnetic Accelerated Cannons; uses alternating magnetic coils to propel large projectiles at a extreme speed. Can put heavy strain on shields if launched high enough, but generally designed to punch through hulls. If a extremely fast MAC projectile impacts a planet, or a completely solid object, the results can be compared to an amplified atomic bomb.
Gauss Weaponry - Identical to MAC weapons, but on a smaller scale. Innefective against shields unless used on massive scale; designed for unarmored or armored targets.
Railguns - Launches projectiles by using two rails with alternating magnetic currents. Slightly weaker than Gauss weapons, but can be fired rapidly.
Particle Beam weapons - Maintained blasts can lower shields, but they are generally used against armored or unarmored targets.
Ion Weaponry - A weapon that fires Ions, the electrical charges of the atoms allow for effectiveness against shielding and electronics.
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Tech Level: 1-2
Tridyntium Hulls - Current Eos ships would still have Tridyntium Hulls, as their current vessels would be constructed by the Zaedrax. Provides enhanced protection against kinetic and energy weapons.
Particle Shielding - Enhanced Shielding over kinetic shields; disintegrates projectile fire, disperses energy based fire.
Kinetic Shielding - Basic Shielding, provides defense against fast moving objects and projectiles.
Sensors
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Tech Level: 1
Advanced scanners - Basic scanners; can scan and detect resources, minerals, and preform basic functions. Lacks stealth detection, and cannot scan nebulae or other anomalies accurately.
Galactic Navigation
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Tech Level: 1-2
Slipspace Ruptures - Nearly identical to warp drives, Slipspace Ruptures exits within a different dimension from warp portals, and also can serve a wide variety of purposes. Slipspace can be used more accurately, and can even be used on smaller scales to transport units or supplies.
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Tech Level: 1
Viridial Oppulsion - Providing little more power output than standard power sources, Viridial still has its uses, as it has clean emissions and is very efficient. A rather rare resource, its high efficiency slightly counter-acts this.
Stealth Systems
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Tech Level: 1
Basic Radar Stealth - Hull designs and other technologies allow for some specialized vessels to have basic anti-radar stealth systems.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 23, 2012 2:33 am

// Not much going to be added at the moment, as this page's growth is dependant on Zaedrax current events. Just a teaser here atm.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:06 am

You signature ruins this page.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 23, 2012 9:22 am

So be it.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Thu Oct 25, 2012 4:47 pm

Also try changing the name, you know, originality.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:14 pm

Name was introduced on Pho's event, would take a shit load of edits to fix. Besides that, only the emblem, name, and appearance of a handful of them will be the same as Halo's Prometheans.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:16 am

Lame. Be original.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 8:45 am

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Besides that, only the emblem, name, and appearance of a handful of them will be the same as Halo's Prometheans.

so basically you're breaking the rules again
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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:08 am

Haha

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:17 am

funny that you're not defending yourself.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:21 am

Just take the extra step so you don't look so bad. I know you like Halo, that's pretty prevalent but at least change the name. No one cares about the symbol or the unit pictures but at least try and be original.

This is like if I made a subspecies of humans in Aeria called Uruk-hai, used Uruk images but had no relation to the Lord of the Rings actual Uruk-hai and how they're half-breed orc. It'd be lame and Munroe and I assume like six others would come into the thread and shit on me.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 10:42 am

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This is like if I made a subspecies of humans in Aeria called Uruk-hai, used Uruk images but had no relation to the Lord of the Rings actual Uruk-hai and how they're half-breed orc. It'd be lame and Munroe and I assume like six others would come into the thread and shit on me.


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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Fri Oct 26, 2012 11:05 am

I removed the posts, now stop arguing.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 1:43 pm

Finished

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:06 pm

you do realize this page is 10 times wider than it needs to be and is a pain in the ass to actually read. like how did you even accomplish this
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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:09 pm

Is the font fucked up, or the ship?

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:18 pm

i don't know what the fuck you did but you fucked up, it's a pain in the ass to read your thread.

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Most Striders are generally over one-hundred feet tall, and are known for having extreme psychic power.
-- No. Bioware called, they want their content back. Secondly, that is OP as fuck. seriously venom it's like a daily occurrence now. Thirdly, robots can't be psychic. They're robots.

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-- Are you kidding me? Am I being trolled right now? Not only 100 trillion AI, but 1 billion 100 foot tall psychic robots? What are you thinking?

The entire flagship is just OP as fuck. No, sorry sir, but your credit score isn't good enough to buy a god damn death star.

lastly, where is the background? all you have is little blurbs here and there. How the fuck did they amass 1 billion of themselves and rebel over 100 trillion "AI" for example? What other AI follow them exactly? How the FUCK did the Zaedrax have the resources to make this OP ship? Like seriously.

I'm looking at this thread and all I can think is, either you're trolling me hard, or you've learned nothing from what me and gambit have been telling you.

Denied until serious changes have been made.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:30 pm

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i don't know what the fuck you did but you fucked up, it's a pain in the ass to read your thread.

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Most Striders are generally over one-hundred feet tall, and are known for having extreme psychic power.
-- No. Bioware called, they want their content back. Secondly, that is OP as fuck. seriously venom it's like a daily occurrence now. Thirdly, robots can't be psychic. They're robots.

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100 Trillion AI / 1 Billion Striders
-- Are you kidding me? Am I being trolled right now? Not only 100 trillion AI, but 1 billion 100 foot tall psychic robots? What are you thinking?

The entire flagship is just OP as fuck. No, sorry sir, but your credit score isn't good enough to buy a god damn death star.

lastly, where is the background? all you have is little blurbs here and there. How the fuck did they amass 1 billion of themselves and rebel over 100 trillion "AI" for example?

I'm looking at this thread and all I can think is, either you're trolling me hard, or you've learned nothing from what me and gambit have been telling you.

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The Striders were the native race of Bihbulba, who by chance happened to be the ancestors of modern Zaedrax.

Organics, not robots.
As for size, nature works in mysterious ways. Obviously outfitting them in combat is incredibly difficult, and would rarely be done, or in few few numbers,

As for 100 trillion AI, yeah, software, existing upon massive "Think-Tanks", which are massive databases. Not individual little guys running around. I'll Nerf the Strider pop. count however.

Ship is slightly op due of fire rate, but i'll change that. Far from a deathstar. Noted the potential of the energy as simply being what can be used at max, not ever used practically, as it would destroy the ship's tier 1-2 reactors. Besides that, the weapons systems may be vast, but are specialized within their respective fields. I'll try to tweak it to find out some sort of median. Also should note, this is their only vessel, and the reproduction of other vessels will take them a very, very, long time.

As for background, not really an incredible amount to write.

*Powerful psychic race is abused and subjugated
*AI advancements proceed
*AI reach sentience, angry at creators
*Abused race takes advantage, pushes AI to rebel
*They do so, and the two newly freed races form a nation

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:42 pm

No, here's what you're GOING to do;

- Striders are neither going to be 100 feet tall nor psychic if they're robots or whatever I don't care.

- Deathship is going to be massively nerfed. Could care less if its their only ship. I'm not going to direct you to what needs to be removed because I pretty much have a problem with almost every single weapon/defense system the ship has. Do it, I don't care how.

- Lower the AI number by a LOT. I don't care if they don't have physical bodies, it's a lot.

This is not an argument, this will be done or your race is denied. After you've edited accordingly I will check it again.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:45 pm

It's tier 2 tech in almost everything. You're only allowed to start with t1 tech.

I don't mind psionics, even though pretty much every race has them at this point. Just don't make them 100 feet tall. 100-foot tall bipeds... that's impossible. And unbalanced besides. How can any empire hope to fight an army of these?

The 100 trillion AI is conceivable (since AIs are just data), but still pretty unbalanced. 100 trillion AIs working in unison could discover the meaning of life, the universe, and everything. Oh, and pretty much annihilate any opposition. You realize most empires only have populations in the tens of billions, right?

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:46 pm

i'm going to have to write a new rule about psychics as well.
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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:51 pm

I will address everything tomorrow, and fix it according to Blitz's request. However, the tier 2 tech should be noted, since they are a direct result and mirror of current Zaedrax tech {Besides their secret technology}.

In the meantime, i'll quickly alter those changes. Further detail such as in depth anatomy, ground forces, and other crap will be added tomorrow, when my power isn't flickering on and off due to that cunt Sandy.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 2:58 pm

Change log:

Striders bumped down to 65-70 feet tall

Only 5 trillion AI

Removal of Energy Projectors from Retribution and from tech list, resulting in a bump down to tier 1-2 weapons.

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:00 pm

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Striders bumped down to 65-70 feet tall

Only 5 trillion AI

Removal of Energy Projectors from Retribution and from tech list, resulting in a bump down to tier 1-2 weapons.

1. Why must they be so tall?

2. That's still a hell of lot of AI programs...

3. "Tier 1-2" weapons?

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PostSubject: Re: The Eos    Tue Oct 30, 2012 3:02 pm

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No. Really? How many times, Venom, how many times?
Okay, they have to be under 10 feet.

I'm going to check this tommorow, and when I do I expect to see

1, a not fucked up page that is 10 pages too wide.

2, no iron giants with psychic powers.

3, a heavily nerfed flagship.

4, an actual history/backstory about maybe how they actually rebelled or gained independence?

5, A LOT LESS AI

6, your technology shit in order.

If I find out that any of this OP stuff is also in your other nation and you're not telling me or gambit I'm not going to be very happy. good night.

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