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PostSubject: Martha Greene   Mon Oct 01, 2012 1:29 pm


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Full name: Martha Agnus Greene
Age 24
Gender: Female
Birthplace:Unknown. Raised an orphan
Deity:Cyus
Occupation: Pirate
Race:Kazuth [Leonthrope - Lion]
Biography: (Sorry if the Bio's a little choppy. I sorta suck at these things)
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Skills: Gunnery- Through practice over the years of her life. She knows how to shoot a ships cannon, Aswell as using Fire-arms such as the Pistol and The Blunderbuss

Swordsmanship- Being Trained through mentoring from her "Mother" and through experience. Martha has Learned to use a sword with a decent amount of Efficiency against her target. And she isn't afraid to fight Dirty

Transformation- Being a Leonthrope (Essentially a Were-lion) She has the Ability to Take the abridged form of a Lion. Increasing her strength and speed greatly, Aswell

Fighting style: Dirty Fighting.


Languages: Common ,Highland, Occitanian, Sidan

Inventory: Steel Cutlass , 2 wheel-lock pistols, 1 Blunderbuss, 1 Steel dagger

Hair color: Brown

Hair style: Long Braided hair (See picture)

Eye color: Brown

Allignment: Chaotic Neutral- Being a Pirate She'll do almost Anything for money. She takes a bribe pretty Easily but that doesent mean She'll be honest after she receives it. She's a lieing Caniveing Greedy woman. But then again she is a Pirate right?.


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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:38 pm

Hopefully you're familiar with the firearms in this setting, matchlock and wheel-lock (or motile-lock if you want to be really fancy). Leonthropy is not unheard of in Aeria's lore, there are 'thropes for many different animals, but that's asking for a lot. 'Thropes are extremely dangerous and powerful. Surna doesn't get too many pirates either, seeing as it's landlocked and all. It has a river, though. River pirates?

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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:00 pm

river pirates in the deep south. huck finn. durhur

look at me, im not being helpful at all

the picture is pretty, though
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Mon Oct 01, 2012 8:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Tue Oct 02, 2012 5:37 am

Any questions you have you may speak to me, as I do have a lycanthrope of my own.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Tue Oct 02, 2012 12:46 pm

Toasters wrote:
"Race:Kazuth [Leonthrope - Lion]"


First off, the Kazuth are a race of cat people. So, Leonthropic Kazuth is basically a cat. Turning into a bigger cat. Then killing folks. Turning back into a smaller cat. And going about their day.
Yeah, change that race to human. Or one of the elf races.

Anyways, I like it so far.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Tue Oct 02, 2012 2:30 pm

As negative as my views are of Kazuth, I see no reason to change the race.

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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:17 pm

I agree with Munroe. No reason to really change the race.

But I do see a few things worth a bit of concern.

First, there are no flintlocks in Olden yet. The most common type of firearm is the Matchlock Arquebus. You should see this thread and this thread before you continue.

Second.

From her Biography.

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"She started it -Nya"


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"It's near a trade City so Why should'nt it have a lot of profit in it?-Nya"

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Nya

No. Please, no. The Kazuth, to the extant that they exist in Olden today, are anything but the stereotypical anime catgirl. So, please, don't use that. In fact, they should actually look much less like humans with cat eats and tail and more like humanoid felines, but since the lore isn't concretely established on that part yet, I'll let it slide.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Tue Oct 02, 2012 4:38 pm

Pat wrote:
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Nya

man, this gave me such a good laugh
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Wed Oct 03, 2012 3:46 am

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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Wed Oct 03, 2012 5:02 am

Fire the DESU~CANNON! *Updated* Fixed the little -Nya joke in the Biography, and changed the flint lock pistols to Wheel lock pistols
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Thu Oct 04, 2012 7:42 am

Updated with Fighting styles and..Eh..Call em special attacks or something? Techniques? Something like that?
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Thu Oct 04, 2012 9:59 am

Describing moves your character does is just as pointless as labeling some of their items as "potent," if not even more so. This isn't a MOBA.

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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:36 am



It has come to my attention that this character has been PK'd and needs to be moved to the Permanently Killed section.

Munroe, Pat or Rutabega needs to move this.

Correct me if I am wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:37 am

Phoenix you're right R.I.P
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Sun Oct 07, 2012 5:37 am

It's been NLR'd because the character is not accepted nor did he know how to RP it well.
Unless Munroe has changed his mind, it should be this way.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Sun Oct 07, 2012 6:08 am



This is why you have to have direct permission from admin before applying for a therianthrope. We can't have this kind of stuff happening every time a player plays a potentially powerful character. We are supposed to avoid these situations.

I propose that any player that wants a vampire or therianthrope, as well as some other powerful races, should have a post by the admin saying permission has been given. It is not hard to send a PM to Mun or Ruta on the forums, so send them a question or request about the way the characters with special situations should be played.

It will help everyone out in the long run and we will not have to repeat this scenario.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Sun Oct 07, 2012 7:00 am

Well. I sort of did ask an admin before creating the character. Well actually two :\ Non the less I apologize for the trouble.
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PostSubject: Re: Martha Greene   Thu Oct 25, 2012 9:25 pm

Has everything been worked out with this character? I don't see a single accept at the moment, and I'm unsure if Toaster is playing her.

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