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PostSubject: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:00 pm



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Age:8 years old
Gender:Male
Race:Human [Sidan]
Birthplace:Seljuk
Deity:None
Occupation:None

Biography Chapter 1: The Curse of the Noble's child
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Chapter 2:A sad truth
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Chapter 3: Breaking point
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Chapter 4: He who runs away from the sword of dispair shant heal from the wounds in which it inflicts
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Skills: No notable skills as of yet

Languages: Sidan

Inventory:Slate gray robe. White desert scarf. Brown shoes(See character picture)

Hair color:Crimson

Hairstyle:Short unkempt hair (See character picture)

Eye color: Brown

Allignment: Neutral (Leans strongly towards [Good Due to recent events)


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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:05 pm

I think the backstory is kind of interesting. There's not enough children in Surna, let alone one like this. I love the way your character looks as a whole. I think he's adorable to an extent, and look forward to seeing what's gonna happen to him. You get an accept from me 100%
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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:47 pm

I almost cried from how sad this was.

Jesus, I give a 100% Accept

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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:55 pm



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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:58 pm

PhoenixRhapsody wrote:
Children are always automatically DENIED.

There is little to no room for RP beyond the most simple interaction because of the following:
  • No children allowed in the tavern.
  • Children are terrible for character development as they are limited in maturity.
  • The closest I have ever seen was Jolie-Estrella Violetta Abrielle.
  • With all the evil things happening in the town, the likelihood of a child being allowed to stay in town is none. The watch would undoubtedly have him taken to another town for his own safety.
  • All children are without means to protect themselves.
  • Pedobear.
  • If he ever gets a chance to say something, it will be discredited because he is a child.


Seriously, this makes about as much sense as using knifes instead of feathers in a tickle fight.


Kinda harsh, no?
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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 1:00 pm

Black Banana Party wrote:
PhoenixRhapsody wrote:
Children are always automatically DENIED.

There is little to no room for RP beyond the most simple interaction because of the following:
  • No children allowed in the tavern.
  • Children are terrible for character development as they are limited in maturity.
  • The closest I have ever seen was Jolie-Estrella Violetta Abrielle.
  • With all the evil things happening in the town, the likelihood of a child being allowed to stay in town is none. The watch would undoubtedly have him taken to another town for his own safety.
  • All children are without means to protect themselves.
  • Pedobear.
  • If he ever gets a chance to say something, it will be discredited because he is a child.


Seriously, this makes about as much sense as using knifes instead of feathers in a tickle fight.


Kinda harsh, no?

Kinda true.
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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 1:16 pm

PhoenixRhapsody wrote:
Children are always automatically DENIED.

There is little to no room for RP beyond the most simple interaction because of the following:
  • No children allowed in the tavern.
  • Children are terrible for character development as they are limited in maturity.
  • The closest I have ever seen was Jolie-Estrella Violetta Abrielle.
  • With all the evil things happening in the town, the likelihood of a child being allowed to stay in town is none. The watch would undoubtedly have him taken to another town for his own safety.
  • All children are without means to protect themselves.
  • Pedobear.
  • If he ever gets a chance to say something, it will be discredited because he is a child.


Seriously, this makes about as much sense as using knifes instead of feathers in a tickle fight.

Children are not always automatically denied (Jolie-Astrella Violetta Abrielle). I don't like them, personally, because they're either shallow and immature or like a Mary Sue who can do anything as well as or better than an adult can. This one in particular is a bit clich├ęd. His parents never loved him, he never had any friends, his family died, boo hoo hoo. But whatever.

  • Not grounds for denial...
  • Yes, unless you're an extremely good RPer.
  • Yes.
  • I don't know about that. The evil stuff is mostly going on behind the scenes. The goblin aggression has also come to a halt, meaning the town is likely much safer.
  • Also not grounds for denial. RP isn't just about combat.
  • I sincerely hope we never have to worry about that.
  • Not necessarily grounds for denial.

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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 1:54 pm

if he cant use magic and hes not a badass, i will not be flipping any tables
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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Tue Sep 25, 2012 2:36 pm



I was harsh. I apologize. This is the only one you will get. Ever.
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PostSubject: Re: Shazad Namir   Mon Oct 08, 2012 4:57 am

Denied. This character thinks and acts like an adult, which pushes it into Mary Sue territory. That, and a couple of the reasons Phoenix listed, are my reasons for denial.

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