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PostSubject: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptySat Sep 01, 2012 12:56 pm

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Full Name:Morigen Arya Esmer
Nickname(s): Marya, Morigen the Merciless
Gender: Female
Age: 127 years
Race: Daefar
Languages: Common, Daefar, Inferian
Birthplace: Inferia, Kerodil
Birthday: twelfth day of the tenth month
Occupation: Assistant to the Regional Manager of Imperial Trade

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Hair Colour: White
Hair Style: Down with decorations
Eye Colour: Red
Skin Tone: Ebony-grey
Height: 5'5 OR 165 cm
Weight: 133 lbs OR 60.33 kg
Body Type: Lean with pronounced musculature
Body Measurements: 38 inch (bust) x 24 inch (waist) x 36 inch (hip)
Distinguishing Features: Blue lips and very light blue eye sclera

Personality:
Until recently she was not the romantic type, but she has begun to seek the approval of her lovers over that of the general populace. She has mellowed out significantly since her arrival in town, more focused now with setting up shop and avoiding arrest. Having tasted the sweet nectar Surna offers, Morigen has begun to work on building up her reputation in a good way, both with her dear ones and the possible clients of the area. With each day, she finds her fancies drifting away from the wild and moving to town life. Among her growing lure to her new life is the want to purchase things like fine clothing and armor.

Biography:

TL;DR Biography:

Skills:

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Deity: Cyus
Weapon: (+2) Legionnaire's Bamboo Bow and (+1) steel skinning knife [Made by Aedelric,] 14 steel broadhead arrows, 10 silver broadhead arrows.
Apparel: Rawhide boot (x2), fine blue velvet shirtwaist dress, skimpy blue lingerie bra, skimpy blue lingerie panty, enchanted gold spectacles.
Misc. Inventory:

  • Coinpurse with 4784 shillings.
  • Pouch of assorted flavoring herbs.
  • A book.
  • A spool of thread and a roll of leather with sewing needles.
  • A thimble.
  • Fence's blackbook.
  • Cordonium gem in leather pouch.
  • Fire opal pendant on fine gold chain appraised at 14 noble.
  • Ceremonial dagger with embedded star ruby jewel appraised at 12.5 nobles.
  • Case of fine cigars. (x11)
  • Case of Ahdsurian white wine.
  • Master craft Silver dagger.
  • Ten rare, gold, Talibarian coins.
  • Enchanted orium and white gold ring with azure blue, topaz gem inset.
  • Imperial Trade employment ID papers.
  • Keys to Imperial Trade headquarters and the various properties it owns.


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Last edited by PhoenixRhapsody on Mon Oct 22, 2012 11:52 am; edited 54 times in total (Reason for editing : I accidentally the universe.)
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptySun Sep 02, 2012 5:02 pm

Sold the knife, bought a beer, and used two arrows. Added the personality.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptySun Sep 02, 2012 5:43 pm

Unusual name for an Occitanian. Any particular reason for that? :O
What a lovely format :3
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptySun Sep 02, 2012 6:14 pm

Very odd to find Drow in Occitan, even after the fall of the Kaiser's regime.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptySun Sep 02, 2012 9:54 pm

And you should also consider which nation-state in Occitan they've come from, considering this can change your accent and in some of the regions your attitude towards outsiders of Occitan, amongst other things.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 2:01 am

Thank you all for such loveely input to help with my character! :D

I wish Pat were this helpful.Not really
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 6:31 am

I added a full Bio and a TL;DR for the lazy people. I also added some skills such as enhanced arrow and imbued arrow. They are both based off the D&D skills and have been balanced, but can always be changed. She runs a business fencing goods and selling her own skins which provides her with regular income.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 9:01 am

prestigeclassmuch

but in all honesty, it seems you did honestly try to balance out the abilities, so I won't make a big fuss over basing your skills on a prestige. I'll slowly get through all of this in time, but first:


"Demonology - Morigen was taught how to combat demons and other dark creatures as part of her training with the Legion. Her knowledge is vast but sometimes unreliable.

She is an expert on demonology."

I would place "vast but unreliable" under adept, not expert. Expert implies reliability.

The other skills look ok, and not a big deal. Her focus is clearly ranged combat, and I'm glad to see she specializes like that. Your other character, Reis Ti, felt too much like an all-rounder with her original abilities prior to your editing. This one, I feel way more comfortable with.

That said, she is definitely not a 'starting' character and more like an intermediate one. I expect you to play her responsibly. In addition, any dnd-related content you want to base your character on should probably go through me first.

ill check the rest of the profile more closely next time i come around
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 9:41 am

Righto.

Bits-n-bobs will be taken care of.

Honestly, I try to start out OP so that everyone can chisel out my character to an ideal beginner. I would much rather make a statue from marble that starts out looking like an Adonis than a mud man built up from a twig. It makes my characters more rounded.

And thusly, may the many people draw out their chisels and hammers to tear down the walls of OPpression to secure their freedoms.

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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 2:32 pm

Dat ass.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 3:17 pm

LawnJesus wrote:
Dat ass.

I was anticipating that comment. :D

Also, to those concerned, steam crashed during the bar fight.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 5:58 pm

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Alignment: Lawful Evil

Where did all the good guys go? ._.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 03, 2012 6:03 pm

Krug wrote:

Where did all the good guys go? ._.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GoodIsBoring
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 2:52 am

I will be making a good guy next.

Oh, and updating the page.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 3:48 am

This character seems well rounded to me, though the combination of magic and ranged combat only rarely doesn't result in my hesitation; however, you are a solid roleplayer, and the magic seems balanced, this character is one of the few where I feel safe about someone combining the usage of magic and ranged attack. I like the idea of defensive/supplemental magic and offensive ranging; one relies on the other, the two have to work in a congruent fashion if both are to be used, and one is stronger than the other. I would ask though, how many arrows can she imbue before battle? An arrow from a proper longbow can easily punch through chainmail; does she have a shorter bow, and as such need the extra 'oomph' to get the arrow through chainmail/armor?

I am not an expert on the lore, though I have been trying to study (but AP Physics I've been trying to study more-so); you will need to make sure the lore is up to par with those who have commented before; they will definitely be able to help chisel down your character to where she needs to be. = )

The biography was well done, the app seems healthy; I trust her ability to be played well, as you have shown in character. Once the lore details have been ironed out, and perhaps any other unseen issues that my scrublet eyes didn't notice are ironed out; I'll give you an accept.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 4:08 am

Krug wrote:
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Alignment: Lawful Evil

Where did all the good guys go? ._.

Spoiler:

Pending until I read the backstory fully.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 3:15 pm



She will be the founder of the First Community Cyberbrothel of Surna, Butt Hole Road, Surna, Sanctimonia.

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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 3:17 pm

PhoenixRhapsody wrote:
She will be the founder of the First Community Cyberbrothel of Surna, Butt Hole Road, Surna, Sanctimonia.



BUTT HOLE ROAD.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 3:18 pm

Road Trip Baby
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyWed Sep 05, 2012 4:51 am

Drow are an uncommon sight in Inferia, but not unheard of. I don't think they'd be the only race in that village, however, since Inferia's a mixed culture.

You say she trained with mages. I'm guessing you mean the Inferian Legion. That's fine, but she likely wouldn't be an "expert" on Demons unless she joined the Parietis. As for Hansen, he's probably going to wind up a Zor, but he'd have to outlive the current Empress if he wants her position.

The bit about the miniatures and Cordonium devices fits perfectly. The piece she has is likely a Cordonium battery, designed to store a lot of energy but release it slowly over a long duration.

Anyways, it's fine as is. Accepted.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 10, 2012 6:28 am



The Grace Period BUMP.
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyMon Sep 10, 2012 8:14 am

dat ass
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyTue Sep 11, 2012 5:05 am

LawnJesus wrote:
dat ass

Gambit wrote:
dat ass

Where you been?
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PostSubject: Re: Morigen Esmer   Morigen Esmer EmptyWed Sep 19, 2012 12:10 pm



Changed monthly income to bi-weekly income.
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