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PostSubject: Johnathan Edward Tane   Mon Apr 09, 2012 6:01 am

Johnathan Edward Tane



Age: Thirty-Nine
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Birthplace: A small village, out on the Sword Coast.
Deity: Tyr

Biography: Born out on the Sword Coast, John grew up in a small, decrepit-looking fishing village, the meagre amounts of fish he caught going to his family, to keep them fed. On his sixteenth birthday, he packed his things, walking towards the capital city, with the plan of getting a job, and living a life of wealth. He wandered vaguely along the roads, as he neared the capital. As he reached it, he found a poster, advertising for the city's guard. He went as quickly as possible to the nearest Watchouse, joining up. He spent years attempting to enact law, training, and helping in the slums around the capital, for 12 years of his life. After all this, he decided to move to Surna, escaping the squalor of the city.


Skills: Johnathan can use a sword as well as his training as a guardsman would allow, and is skilled with a pike.

Inventory: Johnathan retains his old, battered helmet, and breasplate, leather boots, five-hundred gold, and his pike and sword.
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:06 pm

At the age of 16 he leaves and joins up the capital city's guard, whichever city is the capital right now. The character otherwise is a very basic one, but the backstory just feels rather rushed and not that coherent.
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:44 pm

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Skills: Johnathan can use a sword as well as his training as a guardsman would allow, and is skilled with a pike.

I think this may be a little too brief considering you're apping for him to be a guard, and it's inevitable you will need to you use your skills. Elaboration on what he can and can't do would be appreciated. :3
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Tue Apr 10, 2012 2:48 am

Alright, sorry it's a little short. Didn't put too much effort into it.
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Thu Aug 23, 2012 5:29 pm

Owain6521 wrote:
Alright, sorry it's a little short. Didn't put too much effort into it.

Yeah.. i feel like theres little information on the character.. for now its a pending for me .. work on it and i may give you a better rating.
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Thu Aug 23, 2012 5:48 pm

Milo wrote:
Owain6521 wrote:
Alright, sorry it's a little short. Didn't put too much effort into it.

Yeah.. i feel like theres little information on the character.. for now its a pending for me .. work on it and i may give you a better rating.



i hope you read the timestamps on these posts
because this thread is a couple months old
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Fri Aug 24, 2012 12:05 am

Yeah, word of warning to watch out for old threads. No harm done though.
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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Fri Aug 24, 2012 2:13 am

guise bamp dis.
so urignil gr8 idea 10/10 master roleplay.

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PostSubject: Re: Johnathan Edward Tane   Fri Aug 24, 2012 3:10 am

This was that character that was suddenly in the watch without any apps and was rushed to completion so he could apply properly.

Yep, think I know where this is going.

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