HomeFAQRegisterLog in

Share
 

 O, Sweet Memory - Commentary

Go down 
AuthorMessage
Hyperiant
Vengaboy
Hyperiant

Posts : 157
Join date : 2012-02-09

O, Sweet Memory - Commentary Empty
PostSubject: O, Sweet Memory - Commentary   O, Sweet Memory - Commentary EmptyTue Apr 03, 2012 8:17 am

Nice story. The style is very believable and the character's emotions seem genuine. It's a great story so far and I'm surprised there wasn't a commentary thread for this already. Needless to say, I'm excited to see more.
Back to top Go down
Pat
Administrator
Pat

Posts : 457
Join date : 2012-02-04

O, Sweet Memory - Commentary Empty
PostSubject: Re: O, Sweet Memory - Commentary   O, Sweet Memory - Commentary EmptySat Apr 14, 2012 7:25 am

I agree. You should continue this.

_________________
O, Sweet Memory - Commentary Tumblr_mhz664VuqA1rivyo4o4_400
Back to top Go down
 
O, Sweet Memory - Commentary
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Toxic Memory (Sayrns Intro)

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: Fanfiction :: Commentary Threads-
Jump to: