Age: Unknown, as The Labyrinth is a creature Gender: Male Race: Creature Birthplace: The forest outside of the village. Deity: Does not have one, because The Labyrinth is a creature
Biography: Not much is known about the Labyrinth. The Labyrinth is very similar to the Keeper, yet is more evolved in intelligence. The Labyrinth is known to walk about the streets, scour the rooftops, watching people pass by. The Labyrinth is also known to be in the forest, looking for scrap food, prey, and even wandering travellers to talk to. The Labyrinth resembles a humanoid figure. Skills: Stealth Attack Talk Slight Life magic, from being in the forest. such as minor heal.
Inventory: Scarecrow Outfit Tomahawk
Markka Dedicated Poster
Posts : 146 Join date : 2012-02-20 Age : 31
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Mon Apr 09, 2012 11:40 pm
What is "The Labyrinth"? I think that's the biggest question right now. What is it, why is it here, how was it created and for what purpose? This seems to be your first character to top it off, so I really can't give an approval to this one as I've never even seen you before, and I think you likely have little to no credibility with us yet. The character page also is very lacking for such a creature none of us knows of.
Dino Scrublet
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-04-08
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:43 am
I dont understand, Do you want me to redo it to tell more knowledge about him? Hes a new creature seen in the forest, he doesnt have much information.
BooM Archmage
Posts : 629 Join date : 2012-02-22 Age : 29 Location : Paradise City, Florida
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:50 am
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Race: Creature
Explain. We don't know what the creature is, where it came from or why it is here. Pending but leaning towards a no. You can always ask one of us for help.
Spoiler:
xel, the goblin king.
Dino Scrublet
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-04-08
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:04 am
I guess Ill make the race something like wood elf, yet not a elf. Like a Wood Human. What would you call that?
Markka Dedicated Poster
Posts : 146 Join date : 2012-02-20 Age : 31
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:19 am
I meant that you should give us more information on what The Labyrinth is in OOC. It's fine if noone has ever encountered this thing in IC or there are no records of such, but if nobody has any clue what this character is even about in OOC then there are going to be problems.
And a "wood human" would probably be called "human" unless there were fundamental differences to the race.
Psyche Keeper of the Thunderboner, Protector of the Hatefuck Chalice
Posts : 141 Join date : 2012-02-04 Location : Fuckshit Creek
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:21 am
Dino wrote:
I guess Ill make the race something like wood elf, yet not a elf. Like a Wood Human. What would you call that?
a human
Dino Scrublet
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-04-08
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:27 am
OH! Thank you The Labyrinth was born in the forest, yet is known to walk the town He is also known to contact certain people in a friendly way. Finally, The Labyrinth is a human, but is not comfortable showing his face. If that does not help, Please, I need help then.
Dino Scrublet
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-04-08
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 8:59 am
Bump.
Psyche Keeper of the Thunderboner, Protector of the Hatefuck Chalice
Posts : 141 Join date : 2012-02-04 Location : Fuckshit Creek
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:13 am
I'm sorry, but I don't see this ever being accepted.
For one thing, ever new player is required to have some semblance of a 'normal' character that is capable of interacting with the townsfolk and experiencing personal growth, without being something contrived like a psychic squid or demon prince.
Being vague in your biography is going to get you nowhere. If you don't give us a real name, age, or backstory, then it can't go through approval.
Dino Scrublet
Posts : 6 Join date : 2012-04-08
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 12:30 pm
His name is The Labyrinth, he is about 16 years old, and was born in the forest, by two animals fucking eachother, WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT!!!
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 12:58 pm
Dino wrote:
His name is The Labyrinth, he is about 16 years old, and was born in the forest, by two animals fucking eachother, WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT!!!
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some semblance of a 'normal' character that is capable of interacting with the townsfolk and experiencing personal growth
I think we just want a more definite idea of the character. Appreciate the extra details, but we can't approve a character when the whole thing is so vague.
Munroe Tryhard
Posts : 602 Join date : 2012-02-06
Subject: Re: The Labyrinth Tue Apr 10, 2012 1:09 pm
Dino wrote:
His name is The Labyrinth, he is about 16 years old, and was born in the forest, by two animals fucking eachother, WHAT ELSE DO YOU WANT!!!
Here's a list of the problems with this. 1. Why would his parents name him the Labyrinth? Why would he name himself the Labyrinth? Why would anyone name him the Labyrinth? 2. Who were his parents, and why did they decide to have a kid out in the woods? Were his parents feral humans living out in the forests? How many of these feral people are there, why are they there, and how do they live? 3. What is drawing this character to Surna? Shouldn't he just stay out in the woods all the time? 4. If he stays out in the woods all the time, how do you plan on RPing with others? 5. Where did he get his gear? 6. How did he learn magic?
