Pat
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 |  Subject: Payback rewrite commentary Mon Apr 18, 2016 7:58 am | |
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Spadge
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| | Subject: Re: Payback rewrite commentary Mon Apr 18, 2016 8:32 am | |
| This is literally the most dog shit fan-fic I have ever read. Every letter of every word was an insult to my intelligence.
When can I expect the next part?
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Pat
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thorogoodd
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| | Subject: Re: Payback rewrite commentary Mon Apr 18, 2016 9:45 am | |
| The worst story I've ever read. It didn't include a single one of my characters. 0/10 I'll not be reading your next issue. | |
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